Question 1 : Can you wear false eyelashes more than once?

I have some,
star gazer ones – http://www.madamelepink.com/purplelongla…
+ bliss ones, if that makes a difference [:

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You can... but be careful. I don't reccomend you use them a lot. I have a many friends that do and it messes up your real ones. My eyelashes are already kinda long, but to make them look even more dramatic I apply mascara closing my eyes [[it curles them w/ out using a eye lash curler... which can also yank them out]]. I wait until it’s dry to apply another coat using fast strokes moving foward and back. Applying mascara to the back of your eyelashes makes them look thicker. You should try it.

Question 2 : Can you wear false eyelashes more than once?

I have some,
star gazer ones – http://www.madamelepink.com/purplelongla…
+ bliss ones, if that makes a difference

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You can… but be careful. I don’t reccomend you use them a lot. I have a many friends that do and it messes up your real ones. My eyelashes are already kinda long, but to make them look even more dramatic I apply mascara closing my eyes [[it curles them w/ out using a eye lash curler... which can also yank them out]]. I wait until it’s dry to apply another coat using fast strokes moving foward and back. Applying mascara to the back of your eyelashes makes them look thicker. You should try it.

Question 3 : Please edit the next chapter of my story.?

• Chapter 2
  Adaleide the Princess
  ADALEIDE: I live in a great, large, white house near the Yak Forest, but I like to call them the Forest of Heaven. They are just too beautiful and have too much adventure to be called that. I love the trees in there. They are high, and are perfect for climbing. There are gardens in that place too; you just have to look in the right places. The gardens have the most colorful flowers, and the flowers have the strongest scent. Our house is a great place too. There are four floors! They all have colorful designs. Mine has the most adventure in it. There are dragons, fighting knights with high swords, some spots with princesses being tucked in a cave, tall mountains in the background fierce storms in some backgrounds, and beautiful lakes in others. Some people say, mother would tell me, that this was a fortune teller. It would tell me what would happen to me in the future, and I hoped that was true, because in the story it tells, the princess is rescued by a handsome prince. My mother gave me this room because Gracia (our maid) told her “She is an adventure girl my dear, not a princess! She is not known for her princess-like talents!” I never really did like Gracia.

  It was eight years ago that I met the strange girls at the door. There were four. One was tall, had long legs, and probably was the second oldest. It turned out though that that girl was the third oldest and loved to run. The girl’s name was Bliss. Bliss had long, dark hair, her eyes were a sky blue, and Bliss had a long, narrow nose. The other one I thought was oldest was oldest. Her name was Claire. Claire was seventeen, just a year older than my older sister, Isabel. Isabel looked a lot like her. She had light dark hair, green-blue eyes; the only difference was their eyes. Isabel’s eyes were almond shaped, and Claire’s eyes were not. The other girl was Amelia. Amelia had golden hair, long eyelashes and, I have to admit, a funny nose. Amelia was not tall for how old Amelia was. Amelia was a year younger than the oldest, and seemed as tall as Bliss. Amelia’s legs were short, her arms and body were skinny. Amelia was most quiet though. The youngest girls were panting. They were very small and looked about the same age; they were five, four, or three. The truth was though that they were four. They had short curly blonde hair (which all the others were straight), one had blue, and one had brown eyes. They had puffy cheeks, and they did not have almond shaped eyes. They were the cutest little things I have ever seen! Their names were Cecily and Cassandra. All their clothes though were like rags. They looked like they came from a dump!

  Gracia was yelling at me for being in the forest too much, but as she did, there was not important information in her speech, so I day dreamed as I waited for her to finish. I imagined me, floating in a river. The river was flowing softly with the wind; the birds chirping songs. It was a beautiful afternoon, the sun was shining on me so brightly, and it was very relaxing. “Knock, Knock!” I was awoken from my dream from a knock on the door. Who could that be? No one ever comes to our house. I dashed over to the door and yelled to Gracia “I’ve got it!”

  Here is the first Chapter of my story if you want to read it.

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I will put the next chapter/900 pages of my story up once I finish editing it if you would like to edit it.

Please be honest when you edit it and I will take any remarks. Do not say things like “You need some work on the grammar.” Tell me what I need to fix.

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im not an expert or anything so disregard this if you want but i think you could work on your descriptions better eg, she was tall with long legs is pretty much saying she was tall a she was tall its kinda implying the same thing (oh and i know i hate ppl saying it needs spelling n grammer too annoying aint it) lol hope it goes well 4 u

Question 4 : Trying to write a story, how does it sound so far?

I’ve written a a lot to it already. More than I will post, obviously, but I just wanted to show a little bit of my story and see your thoughts to it. It’s the first chapter, very beginning. I would appreciate some constructive criticism and thoughts of where improvement would be necessity or preferred. I’m a fourteen year old girl and an aspiring author.

Also: is it better if I were to write in 1st person or 3rd person? thanks for your help!(:
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Alexandra lay on the cold and unfamiliar stone path that she had followed up to this point.
“Perhaps it was hidden for a reason.” she mumbled to herself. She was exhausted and couldn’t move. She regretted her decision to come this far and especially in such weather just to satisfy her curiosity. She smiled as she remembered what her mother always told her. “Curiosity killed the cat,huh?” she whispered as the snow piled on her. Her cheeks grew rosier as her skin turned paler and her eyelashes fluttered as they threatened to close over her warm brown eyes. The wind howled and blew strong,making her soft dark brown hair blow over her face, offering her a weak shield against the elements. She tried to look past it and be able to gaze upon the old tree stump that was by the side of the road. She tried to look past the tree stump and to the frozen lake behind it. But she could barely see past the blur of the dazzling white snow. Her eyelids felt heavy and she could barely stay awake any longer. It felt good to close her eyes and dream away reality. Before she let unconsciousness take her, she thought she saw a figure of a person sitting on the tree stump. The person appeared to be sitting with their legs crossed and hands laid relaxed on either side of of the tree stump. ‘What an odd thing to see in the middle of a deadly snowstorm.’ she thought to herself. ‘Doesn’t even seem to have on a coat.’ she continued on. The figure seemed to be waiting for something but Alexandra had no idea what. It then stood up and walked toward her. ‘I must be losing my mind, it can’t be real. I suppose I’m imagining it all.’ she thought. So with that, she allowed unconsciousness to swallow her up.

A bright light illuminated the inside of Alexandra’s eyelids. It patiently waited for her to wake up as it beckoned her to reveal the eyes that seemed to have gone into hiding. It gave her hope that perhaps she survived the whole ordeal with the snow storm. When was it? Last night? She had no idea. No idea what time it was, if she was even still alive, if she had perhaps simply been asleep and if so how long, and had she imagined the snowstorm. She had many questions that needed answering though she forced them out of her head. She felt bliss in the ignorance of being unaware of her surroundings and felt no need to rush to open her eyes and see the truth. Before long though, a familiar scent reached her nose. It smelled like peppermint tea, which is what she always drank when she woke up in the morning as a child. She soon heard another thing that accompanied her childhood memories. The indescribable ring of a piano. The melody played was a soft one that had a quick tempo, yet was soothing and pleasant to the ears. Alexandra knew she had to awake sooner or later so it might as well be now. She opened her eyes slowly and hesitantly, hoping the beautiful dream she seemed to be having wouldn’t disappear.

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I like it in the POV you have right now. It is most definitely not horrible, to the person who commented before me. I just think you need to seperate the paragraphs a little more. I usually seperate the places where they talk from the descriptions. Also, I think this one part would sound better revised like this:

She smiled in recollection. “Curiousity killed the cat, huh?” Her mother always used to tell her that as a child.

Or something like that. Anyways, I think it sounds really good so far. You have great descriptions, thats for sure. I just think you should re read it a few times, perhaps revise a few sentences. Thats what I always do!

Also, I’d like to suggest a website for you. I am on a website called wattpad, and its a place where you can post your stories. There are some great people on there always willing to read, and Im sure your book would be pretty popular there! Its www.wattpad.com, and if you ever want to find me on there I am InspireMe. Anyways, I think its a great way to get some constructive criticism and boost your writing skills, and Im really glad I joined. It has done wonders for my writing skills! I personally think your writing sounds better than mine though

Question 5 : Poll-who can guess these 10 songs?

1.)can i get an encore, do you want more? cooking raw with the brooklyn boy, so for one last time i need you all to rawr

2.) you, are all i can remember, after all that we’ve been through. forever in my heart, now im through, and june feels like november some cant believe its true.. too long we’ve been apart…

3.)schools out, christmas break, home for the holidays, meatloaf and fruitcake, off to grandmas, its so boring, screaming kids, and grandpa snoring….my aunt margerate’s lost her mind, trippin on a train set have another box of winneee.

4.)pop it down, raise it up, side to side, left to right, lick your lips, flip your hair, watch him sweat over there, high heels, makeup, fake eyelashes, look at you your so damn plastic

5.)show me how to lie your getting better all the time, and turning all against the one is an art that’s hard to teach, another clever word sets off an unsuspecting herd and if you step back in the line a mob jumps to their feet

6.)Can you feel that? Oh **** OOOH AAHHH AAHHH AAHHHH AAHHH (x2) OH OH (x3) Drowning deep in my sea of loathing, Broken your servant I kneel, (Will you give it to me?), It seems what’s left of my human side , Is slowly changing in me, (Will you give it to me?)

7.)i cannot take this anymore, i’m saying everything i’v said before, all these words they make no sense, i found bliss in ignorance, the less i hear the less you’ll say, i found this out anyway (just like before)

8.)black dress, with the tights underneath, i’v got the breath of the last cigarrette on my teeth, and shes an actress (actress), but she ain’t got no need, shes got money from her parents and a trust fund back east

9.)we, were running through the town, our senses had been drowned, no place we haven’t been before, we learned to live and then, our freedon came to an end, we have to break donw this wall, too young to live a lie, look into my eyes

10.)you, change ur mind, like a girl, changes clothes, yeah you,PMS like a b*tch, i would know, and you overthink, always speak, cryptically, i should know, that your no good for me

first one who gets ever song right gets best answer..

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lol these are all from my youtube playlist

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1. encore//numb ; jayz – linkin park
2. one more night; cascada
3. merry friken xmas; relient k
4. i like money; millionaires
5. youre gonna go far kid; offspring
6. down with the sickness; disturbed
7. one step closer; linkin park
8. dont trust me ; 3OH!3
9. ready set go; tokio hotel
10. hot n cold ; katy perr

Quesation 6 : …poems for my girlfriend Mikaela…how do you like these..are they simple enough for you?

Sipping lemonade, yellow like the sun, yet
Why must He steal away all of my Glory?
Kissing upon every glade and flowing river
Might by these I pass, by these I write my story
The fish cease to swim, lilies cease to grow
He enlightens all but mine soul and heart
Despair, hate for all living things, sinking low
Mirror images, two of one, yet one apart
My heart cannot hope to set like this
Into a horizon of happiness, give life to thee
Never to feel the prosperous man’s bliss
Nor bring joy to a feminine sea, nor be
My failure is forever inscribed upon the strife
I can only hope to run away from the light
To take this blade, plunge within, take my life
My blood turning red rivers of the night
I do, said I, I do, said she, death, my wife!

My hands are cupped like woven fruit baskets
Collecting fruit raining from above shades of color
Rain bowed reflections hatched by a timid Sun
Playing peek-a-boo with the verdant valleys gem
My tongue rakes through the leaves of droplets
They taste like a lake I dreamed of while sleeping
You were high, chirping, in an evergreen tree
Little brown birds cried for your attention
You fed them, bathed them, you comforted them
As you once did for me, in yet, my only love
Another, nestled at this warming nest so soft
Your feathers ruffled a nod towards the parting sea
My heart sank like a ship; I knew this tree was his

My heart found peace where sunlight never left
Rolling brown hills appeared greening lush
Graying clouds felt my pain and solemnly wept
Then an angel robed in white sparked a blush
She sang melodies dark upon the hills white
As the wind picked an azalea gleaming stark blue
My soul faded away into the depth of night
This love felt familiar, I knew it had to be you
Tears like misty dew fell upon an eyelash lawn
Hand trembling under the weight of the past
The angel embraced the reddening dawn
Our spirits emerged, now we are free, at last
Which one do you like best? These are dedicated to my girlfriend Mikaela. each tell of a story. Can you decipher what they are about?

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The usual teenage angst-ridden pap. Embarrassing to read